----- Original Message ----
> From: Clint Savage <[email protected]>

> Bold is very bulky.  The 10 on the Fedora 10 disks is just regular
> MgOpen Modata and I think it looks better.

+1 Let's avoid using Modata bold.

> I'm still not decided on the glow.  I kind of prefer the basic look.

I think the basic look, with the modified lion, works great, but now the blue 
glow Fedora logomark looks out of place. Problem is, you take the glow off that 
Fedora logo mark, and you can barely discern it (and certainly won't be able to 
at all after printing) from the dark blue background. The priority I think 
should be on avoiding muddying the logo. 
> 
> > * Kern the "11" so the numbers are closer together; due to the font
> >  metrics they currently look unnaturally far apart.
> 
> I think I got that working.
> >
> > The lion is still pretty busy -- did you want to consider moving the
> > design, so the lion appears more to one corner, and the logo and "11"
> > appear opposite his head?
> 
> I've moved much of the lion off the design.  I also removed a lot of
> the styles that were there to get this effect.  If someone has
> problems with what I've done, please let me know and I'll roll it
> back.

I like it better, it's much easier to read the '11' text.
> 
> A new version are available for consideration.
> 
> http://herlo.fedorapeople.org/art/F11-live-sleeve.tar.bz2

Here's what I got 

http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/art/f11/sleeves/F11LiveMediaSleeve_mo-page001.png

(tar in the same dir)

~m



      

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