docs/livecd-creator.pod     |   22 +++++++++++-----------
 docs/livecd-iso-to-disk.pod |   20 +++++++++++---------
 2 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 0e54ced6f35c8dd8b79da7719581ce96975384c1
Author: Chris Curran <[email protected]>
Date:   Tue Feb 10 13:56:50 2009 -0500

    Update man pages (#484627)

diff --git a/docs/livecd-creator.pod b/docs/livecd-creator.pod
index dcaddc7..b275e65 100644
--- a/docs/livecd-creator.pod
+++ b/docs/livecd-creator.pod
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 =head1 NAME
 
-livecd-creator, creates live cd or dvd images.
+livecd-creator - creates live CD or DVD images.
 
 =head1 SYNOPSIS
 
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ B<livecd-creator> [OPTIONS]
 
 =head1 DESCRIPTION
 
-B<livecd-creator> creates live cd or dvd images from kickstart files. 
Kickstart files contain the information about packages and configurations that 
are built into the image.
+B<livecd-creator> creates live CD or DVD images(ISO images) from kickstart 
files. Kickstart files contain information about packages and configuration 
settings which are used to build the image.
 
 =head1 OPTIONS
 
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ B<livecd-creator> creates live cd or dvd images from 
kickstart files. Kickstart
 
 =item -h, --help
 
-Shows a help message and exits.
+Shows the help message and exits.
 
 =back
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ These options define the created image.
 
 =item -c KSCFG, --config=KSCFG
 
-Path to kickstart config file
+Path to kickstart configuration file.
 
 =item -b BASE_ON, --base-on=BASE_ON
 
@@ -38,23 +38,23 @@ Add packages to an existing live CD iso9660 image.
 
 =item -f FS_LABEL, --fslabel=FS_LABEL
 
-File system label (default based on config name)
+Defines the file system label. The default is based on the configuration name.
 
 =back
 
 =head1 SYSTEM DIRECTORY OPTIONS
 
-These options define directories used on your system for creating the live 
image
+These options define directories used on your system for creating the live 
image.
 
 =over 4
 
 =item -t TMPDIR, --tmpdir=TMPDIR
 
-Temporary directory to use (default: /var/tmp)
+defines the temporary directory to use. The default directory is /var/tmp.
 
 =item --cache=CACHEDIR
 
-Cache directory to use (default: private cache)
+Defines the cache directory to use (default: private cache).
 
 =back
 
@@ -77,14 +77,14 @@ David Zeuthen, Jeremy Katz, Douglas McClendon and a team of 
many other contribut
 
 =head1 BUGS
 
-Report bugs to the mailing list 
C<http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-livecd-list> or directly to 
BugZilla C<http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/> against the C<Fedora> product, 
and the C<livecd-tools> component. 
+Report bugs to the mailing list 
C<http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-livecd-list> or directly to 
Bugzilla C<http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/> against the C<Fedora> product, 
and the C<livecd-tools> component.
 
 =head1 COPYRIGHT
 
-Copyright (C) Fedora Project 2008, and various contributors. This is free 
software. You may redistribute copies of it under the terms of the GNU General 
Public License C<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl.html>. There is NO WARRANTY, 
to the extent permitted by law. 
+Copyright (C) Fedora Project 2008,2009, and various contributors. This is free 
software. You may redistribute copies of it under the terms of the GNU General 
Public License C<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl.html>. There is NO WARRANTY, 
to the extent permitted by law.
 
 =head1 SEE ALSO
 
 C<livecd-iso-to-disk(1)>, project website 
C<http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FedoraLiveCD>
 
-=cut
\ No newline at end of file
+=cut
diff --git a/docs/livecd-iso-to-disk.pod b/docs/livecd-iso-to-disk.pod
index ffe9add..7449c17 100644
--- a/docs/livecd-iso-to-disk.pod
+++ b/docs/livecd-iso-to-disk.pod
@@ -2,15 +2,17 @@
 
 =head1 NAME
 
-livecd-iso-to-disk, install livecd-creator images in usb stick
+livecd-iso-to-disk - installs bootable CD images on a USB storage devices.
 
 =head1 SYNOPSIS
 
-B<livecd-iso-to-disk> [--reset-mbr] [--noverify] [--overlay-size-mb <size>] 
<isopath> <usbstick device>
+B<livecd-iso-to-disk> [--reset-mbr] [--noverify] [--overlay-size-mb <size>] 
<path-to-iso> <usb storage device>
 
 =head1 DESCRIPTION
 
-B<livecd-iso-to-disk> converts a live cd or dvd image into a bootable USB 
stick. This is not a destructive process; any data you currently have on your 
USB stick will be preserved.
+B<livecd-iso-to-disk> installs a live CD or DVD image(ISO image) onto a USB 
storage device. The USB storage device can then boot the installed operating 
system on systems which support booting via USB. B<livecd-iso-to-disk> requires 
an ISO image and a USB storage device. ISO images can be created with 
B<livecd-creator>.
+
+B<livecd-iso-to-disk> is not a destructive process; any data you currently 
have on your USB stick is preserved.
 
 =head1 OPTIONS
 
@@ -18,29 +20,29 @@ B<livecd-iso-to-disk> converts a live cd or dvd image into 
a bootable USB stick.
 
 =item --reset-mbr
 
-Resets Master Boot Record of usb stick by copying syslinux's mbr.bin.
+Sets the Master Boot Record(MBR) of the USB storage device to the mbr.bin file 
from the image's syslinux directory.
 
 =item --noverify
 
-Disables image validation before installing it.
+Disables the image validation process which occurs before the image is 
installed. When this option is enabled the image is not verified before 
installation on the USB storage device.
 
 =item --overlay-size-mb
 
-Overlay's size in megabytes. Note that you'll need to have space on your USB 
stick for the live image plus your overlay plus any other data you want on the 
stick.
+This option sets the overlay size in megabytes. The overlay is additional 
storage available to the live operating system if the operating system supports 
it. The USB storage device must have enough free space for the image and the 
overlay.
 
 =back
 
 =head1 CONTRIBUTORS
 
-David Zeuthen, Jeremy Katz, Douglas McClendon and a team of many other 
contributors. See the AUTHORS file in the source distribution for the complete 
list of credits. 
+David Zeuthen, Jeremy Katz, Douglas McClendon, Chris Curran and other 
contributors. See the AUTHORS file in the source distribution for the complete 
list of credits.
 
 =head1 BUGS
 
-Report bugs to the mailing list 
C<http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-livecd-list> or directly to 
BugZilla C<http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/> against the C<Fedora> product, 
and the C<lived-tools> component. 
+Report bugs to the mailing list 
C<http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-livecd-list> or directly to 
Bugzilla C<http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/> against the C<Fedora> product, 
and the C<lived-tools> component.
 
 =head1 COPYRIGHT
 
-Copyright (C) Fedora Project 2008, and various contributors. This is free 
software. You may redistribute copies of it under the terms of the GNU General 
Public License C<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl.html>. There is NO WARRANTY, 
to the extent permitted by law. 
+Copyright (C) Fedora Project 2008,2009, and various contributors. This is free 
software. You may redistribute copies of it under the terms of the GNU General 
Public License C<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl.html>. There is NO WARRANTY, 
to the extent permitted by law.
 
 =head1 SEE ALSO
 


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