I'm sorry to say that this is not the copy that I proofread and corrected.

Note the "who's" instead of the corrected "whose".

It reflects badly on the Fedora Docs team to have such obvious
grammatical errors.

Can we revise the blog to correct this? Correcting the "who's" would suffice.

Otherwise, the announcement is fine.

Best Regards,

John Babich
Member, FDSCo

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