Hi vidur, Greetings Once you are through your presentation, If can help you with corrections and editing.And I suggest you to keep the major details such as the introduction objectives very crisp and clear.In my view point you need to shuffle your order of contents..I mean, Comp b/w linux and win should follow the objective.And the benefits are actually a part of your "Why use Fedora".Try to avoid redundancy.Use attractive sideheadings as the govt offices generally pay heed to appearance as compared to the content comparatively. good luck..If I may b of any help 2 u, feel free to drop me a mail.
2008/8/7 Vidur Mittal <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > HI, > > I am trying to give presentation of FEDORA to few of the govt. deptt.. I am > trying to make a presentation over fedora i want all the team to come > forward and help in this regards.The points which i am thinking to include > in presentation are as follows: > > 1. Objective > 2. Benefits > 3.Comparison between Windows and Linux > 4.Comparison between different flavour of Unix > 5.Why use fedora > 6.A short introduction of redhat and fedora project > 7.Help and support of fedora. > > Now i want every one to come and help me in this regards so that i can > complete the presentation. Please also guide me that i have included all the > point for the presentation. > Thanks in advance > -- > With Best Regards > Vidur Mittal > Meerut > > -- > Fedora-marketing-list mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-marketing-list > -- Regards Sriram :-)
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