On Jan 14, 2012, at 9:15 AM, Nat Russo wrote:

> More writing questions for Ray :)
> 
> Well, actually I'm not sure if this is a question or statement...or statement 
> hidden within a question...mystery wrapped in an enigma or some such.  But I 
> digress already.
> 
> While writing my first draft was a relatively fast-paced activity, I'm 
> finding the revision process to be exactly the opposite.  I began by reading 
> through the entire book, cover to cover, and making shorthand notes on what I 
> wanted to change/tweak.  Now I'm beginning the revision in earnest and 
> finding that this is a far more detail-oriented operation than the original 
> writing process was.  When I was writing the first draft I had a very simple 
> goal...get it written!
> 
> Now, after going back over it, it feels like I did a good job of throwing 
> some modeling clay down on paper, but there's still a lot of sculpting to do. 
>  Is this the case in your experience as well?  Or have you found that as you 
> grew in experience you were more likely to get closer to hitting the mark the 
> first time around?
> 
> I thought I would have mixed feelings about going back and rewriting, but I'm 
> finding that it's sort of like getting to take a test a second time before 
> turning it in to the teacher :)
> 
> Nat
> 
> -- 
> Sent from my Crappy Laptop (tm) using a poor excuse for a web browser.
> 


Everyone experiences the writing process differently, so whatever works for you 
is just fine.  Harlan Ellison loves to claim he never rewrites, which is true 
up to a point, but he'll pause as he's typing (and he still uses a typewriter) 
cross things out and handwrite changes on the page before he's even pulled it 
out of the patten. 

Others make several pass throughs until it's "just so."  

I tend to tweak once, but sometimes more if I have a problem scene in my head, 
and that's my litmus test, if I remember a scene back chapters earlier that I 
know doesn't feel right, I go back to it.  If there's nothing bothering me I 
figure it's done.

Best, R.E.F.
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