You know, even if you were published I would purchase your book because of the arrogance.
To come on a list dedicated to a well respected and successful author and not only put him down but self promote yourself as superior without even having been published is beyond bizarre. I hope you get published and your review have you compared to Tolkien, you'll never receive a penny from me and I will not be any less for never having read your far superior, self surprising work. Sent from my iPhone On Jan 28, 2012, at 9:08 AM, [email protected] wrote: > Hi, > I have a right to my comments, the fact many have not taken these very > well - at all, says more about them, than myself: My points were... > > Ok tell me I am wrong in regards the King and the malady, which has struck > him? Tell me please, and I have read neither of these parts yet , but Pug > comes back as a dark robe? > > Sorry predictable!!! > > What is the point in me reading something, where I know what is going to > transpire next? My own work takes me by surprise at times and I have written > it, why is this such a feat to ask by - as you said it yourselves of best > selling authors? Admittedly this is not even just Feist! > > He uses the word reverie too often, and in the wrong context. What are wrong > with, and here's just a few - the words: contemplation, musings? > > Here's another just be going on with, there is a piece where he states, where > the hunters check the Tsurani have left traps. Erm does he not mean - not, or > is this some cunning attempt to lure the Tsurani into a false sense of > security? > > And this is the place my patience held out no more, and if I am wrong please > correct me? > > Garret asked, "What if some of your fellow countrymen had been along?" > > Charles shrugged. "The cho-ja would have been speaking Tsurani. Their > language is almost impossible to learn, so no one tries." > > Hold on, I thought Charles's countrymen were Tsurani, that was the whole > point? And I know the cho-ja can speak the same language as them! > > Also, I also lost empathy for the characters when they insisted on calling > the poor Asian-like bugger - Charles; how very worldly of them... nothing > like having an openmind to new cultures. I suppose, we should be relieved > that they did not refer to him as Bert, Bob or Frank the like? > > I am actually less than two thirds through the first book... I just feel if > he is not prepared to make the effort to get these things right and > consistent, why should I? > > And this is not just me, other people have - and these are avid fans, but > raging inconsistencies between books. > > It is not worth arguing about either, I wanted to be blown-away by this book > and get into reading the entire series. I want to find other authors who are > better than I think I am and be challenged, then I can learn something from > them! I have admittedly learnt some things from Feist, but there is somewhat > more I am disappointed with, but unfortunately this is a fact, and I wish it > were not so - I absolutely wish I had found his book more challenging. > > And no, I don't lurk under bridges, just on a weekend, in scarlet make up, > and a frock - besides... the police have already warned about that! > > In a message dated 27/01/2012 12:35:08 GMT Standard Time, [email protected] > writes: > On Fri, Jan 27, 2012 at 6:10 AM, Anestis Kozakis <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > So, basically you come to the list, put down Ray's work, and push your > > own work as superior even though you are not published and Ray is > > consistently in the new York Times Best Seller list? > > > > This screams of Troll. > > > > I think you might be on the wrong list. > > > >> Yours Sean Sebastian White > > > > Anestis. > > -- > > Anestis Kozakis | [email protected] | http://www.akozakis.id.au/ > > > > > > Well summarized, the ultimate caricature of critic. Since we know the > most brilliant and inciteful (Spelling intentional) minds are > misunderstood and thus will never be recognized or published in their > own lifetime > > LAR > > -- > If you want to take the island, then burn your boats. With absolute > commitment come the insights that create real victory. > -Tony Robbins >
