Re: OT: Need feedback please (soapbox)

[Sheila208]

Phaewryn, I agree with you completely. I really liked Belinda's first draft. I think the shock is just what people need to open there eyes and see the horrible cruelty that there careless indifference causes for these poor babies. Why sugar coat it .We all want to turn our heads when faced with bad things but if we do nothing will change.     Sheila in SC