The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote: > Jan Ken Pow: The variant in which the first one to punch the others in the > face wins. > Did I spell it wrong? > It helps that Kasumi has the same divine blood, no? Because otherwise, > mortals can't even see those... > That was sort of what I was getting at. I just don't care to spoon-feed my readers. >> Urd paused. "We're not sure where exactly we're gonna have Nabiki >> working, but I know she's got the qualifications for most of the jobs >> we've considered. Probably, she'll be in our Accounts Payable >> department, but you never know." >> > > I shudder to think what "Accounts Payable" entails for Yggdrasil... > Handing out wishes, of course!
>> Belldandy considered. "No, I think we've done enough teleporting >> today." >> > > *SNRK* > And everyone thinks that Bell is perfectly nice. >> "Oh, that is easy to explain." Belldandy smiled. "You see, we're >> Goddesses." >> > > *FACEFAULT* Oooookay, so this is TV series Belldandy all of a sudden. X_X > > Possibly. Though she's just as bad in the OVA. However, the fact that these are her sisters will likely make her even less likely to try to cover up the truth. >> Akane shook off the surprise, and grinned. "An android, huh? Skuld's >> cooler than I thought." >> > > Considering how far out of her realm of experience a robot is, Akane's > taking this awfully calmly. > Combat trance. All that would filter into her brain is that she has to change tactics. Though you're right, some kind of reaction would be expected. >> Akane regarded her warily. Rather than leading with her left hand, >> Sigel was now leading with her right. *Did I damage her internals? >> No--she's out of power on the right fist!* >> > > That's a little too technical for Akane's internal thoughts. Might work > better like this: > > *Did I break something?* > > Good call. > That was a fun read, but I'll be honest: it seems > somewhat...well...pointless, to have it just abruptly end like that. I do > get the impression you're probably planning a sequel to this, because it > just seems to me that there's so much more to be done with this idea. As it > stands, though, while it was fun to read, it just...didn't go anywhere. > Others have noted this as well. You are correct, there is a lot more that I plan to do with this - I have the outline for the second part (not really a sequel, but a continuation) halfway done. Thanks for writing. -- Homepage: http://www.tailkinker.net ICQ: 66022322 eMail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] --- .-------Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List--------. | Administrators - [EMAIL PROTECTED] | | Unsubscribing - [EMAIL PROTECTED] | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `------------ FAQ URL coming soon.... -------------'
