I got news for you, Fred.
Your "final drafts" could do with a metric assload of proofreading. You
haven't come anywhere remotely close to removing all the minor grammatical
errors and typos. ^^;;;
I'm just now reading the first prologue, and not even a quarter of a way
through it I've found no fewer than 20 errors.
But, that's what the FFML is for, after all...
It's still an interesting story, although the comments I made about it many
years ago probably still stand...I may have more comments later.
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