The fic was very well written as always. I love stories from Your
universe. The only thing I missed was more of Kentaro and Ranma. I would
really like to read a new story featuring more of them.

The characters of main protagonist and children were extremely well
constructed and very interesting, and I agree with other readers about the
need for more internal monologue at the end.

Thank You, great job, awaiting more :)
Takaya


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