> And chapter three.

BEHOLD, the power of three! Muahahahahahaha!

> > A decidedly unprofessional leer crossed his face. "Sou ka..."
>
> ...well, I guess that's where those warnings are going to come into play.

Ohhhhh yeah.

> > Sleep did not come for Mizuni Ami that night.
>
> Mizuno

O_o;; Thanks...that one slipped past me ten times. X_X

> > Luna snorted. "Good for her. One less bastard rapist in the world."
>
> Hmm.  A little odd sentiment for a youma.

Luna's a youma, but she's still female. And her attitudes have been coloured
by an extended stay in the human world...

> > They left.
> >
> > Ami stood staring at the door for a very long time after.
>
> Well, that could have gone better.

Yep. As Artemis will put it next chapter, "...bugger."

> Wound up having even fewer comments than the past two, but that's
> probably because I was too wrapped up in the story, so that's a good
> thing. ;)

I'll take it as such. *bows*

> After three chapters, it's a very strong start; I'm definitely
> interested in seeing what happens next.

I'm going to get around to finishing chapter four sometime this week; I've
been wrapped up, the last four or five days, in varying degrees of being
sick, being stressed over my glasses not being ready yet at the optical, and
wondering whether or not I was about to have to run from another damn
hurricane.

Tomorrow, I should finally have my glasses, and Dean isn't threatening Texas
at all anymore, so definitely I'll get back on pace this week.

Thanks for the C&C!

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