> Subject: [FFML] [Naruto/Slayers][XOVer][formated]
Whatever you used to format your story, you should probably use it on your
hard drive next.
> The condensed version
Okay, your first mistake? You don't need to *explain* your story. Let your
STORY explain ITSELF.
> is that Naruto learns a fewSlayers verse spells and now
> everyone thinks he'sa genius hiding as an idiot. Of course, > you
canimagine Sasuke's response to that. If you
> readS'tarkon's Legacy of the Resengan then this isjust the
> opposite. Legacy had everyone thinkingNaruto is an idiot
> while he's an genius. This haseverything thinking he's a
> genius while he'sactually an idiot.Unlike "Legacy", there will > actually
be changesbecause of Naruto's action.
And this kind of thing turns your reader off before they ever even get
around to looking at your story, because it's rambling, incoherent, and
makes you sound like a mental defective.
[snip bloated mass of unreadable garbage]
Rule #1 of the FFML: We're not FF.net. We don't appreciate the literary
equivalent of dribbling applesauce all over your bib.
Observe the way other people post around here: correctly formatted posts,
plaintext without HTML attachments, and relying on their own knowledge of
English grammar and typography rather than hoping like hell some piece of
software will compensate for their own inferiority.
You get one more chance. Then I get *nasty*.
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