Interesting. Just a couple of nitpicks:
>He studies his abused hand, which is riddled with
>pinholes, knowing he's going to need a bandage.
Riddled...? He let her stick him more than once!?
>His master could care less about housekeeping,
Should be "couldn't care less..."
>His hair currently tinted the glorious
>gold he's become fond of is set off quite well,
Whatever punctuation you used there (em-dashes?) didn't seem to come through in
plaintext....
Because I normally skip over the pre-fic notes, it took me a few seconds to
realize you were using the original book rather than the movie. It fits in
well with what I remember -- I haven't read it in a while.
I wonder if the Chrestomanci stories would make good anime?
--
...and the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful
than the risk it took to blossom.
--Anais Nin
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