Hi, I'm posting a very minor errata note here about the "Apache Flex 
(incubating)" page (apologies if this is the wrong list). Although minor, it's 
very visible in the small intro paragraph. The last sentence in the first 
paragraph should end with an "s":

http://incubator.apache.org/flex/

That is:

"Flex applications can be deployed to the ubiquitous Adobe® Flash® Player in 
the browser, Adobe® AIR(tm) on desktop and mobile or to native Android(tm), 
IOS(tm), QNX®, Windows® or Mac® application."

Perhaps adding a "the" or "platform" or "device" in the 2nd phrase and using 
semicolons so as not to conflict with the last phrase that has commas (and 
using US list convention) might help:

--> "Flex applications can be deployed to the ubiquitous Adobe® Flash® Player 
in the browser; Adobe® AIR(tm) on desktop and mobile platforms; or as native 
Android(tm), IOS(tm), QNX®, Windows®, or Mac® applications."



Along the same lines (even more minor):
"This will make many enterprises happy since quite a few never invested the 
time or effort into the 4.x model."

è  "This will make many enterprises happy since quite a few never invested time 
or effort into the 4.x model."



I normally wouldn't bother, but since the page is sort of the visible acting 
project home page...



-bruce




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