Gustavo, here are a few things I noticed: -- The sculpture/building image (and maybe some other content) did not load at the same time as the rest of the design; it was somewhat jarring when it/they did finally appear (a few seconds later). You might want to consider embedding all the content (if not doing that is what is causing the delay).
-- The sliding in of the various bits of content (from the left and right) is unusual. But I really like it and I think it works well. -- I would strongly suggest trying to unify the typography (i.e., make it more consistent, etc.). The text at the top is also a bit hard to read. -- I like the looks of the semi-circles (on each side), but they are making your site quite wide (and even without them it is wide). -- In general, I would suggest taking what you've got and trying to simplify the visual design a little. -- This is much cooler than my first Flex application; so what do I know? 8-) Regards, Jim --- In [email protected], Gustavo Duenas <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > HI, finally I've done my first flex web site....it is done, or at > least is that what I think...maybe tomorrow I'll add something else. > > please check it at: > > http://leftandrightsolutions.com/lrsad/bin/lrsad.html > > please don't be so hard in critics, is ok to be criticized but don't > be offensive. > > I hope you like, is not the big deal, but is something that did by > myself, I thank in advance to all of you who help me out > with your advices. > > regards, > > Gustavo > > > > Gustavo A. Duenas > Creative Director > LEFT AND RIGHT SOLUTIONS > 904. 265 0330 - 904. 386 7958 > www.leftandrightsolutions.com > Jacksonville - Florida >
