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Very good, but I must point out that there’s
a slight mistake at the very end. Tee hee doesn’t rhyme. Also, should you include the name of the
author, which you’ll need to do when it appears in anthologies etc, that
won’t rhyme either. Neither does the title rhyme. So that’s three
non rhyming lines. Yours truly, A Poet -----Original Message----- AWEORORE
Chickasaw
dinosaur, Louis d'Or
humidor. Labrador
matador, picador adore. tee hee |
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