Very good, but I must point out that there’s a slight mistake at the very end.

Tee hee doesn’t rhyme.

 

Also, should you include the name of the author, which you’ll need to do when it appears in anthologies etc, that won’t rhyme either. Neither does the title rhyme. So that’s three non rhyming lines.

 

Yours truly,

 

A Poet

 

The Poetry Zone http://www.poetryzone.co.uk

 

Danny Chaucer http://www.dannychaucer.com

 

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AWEORORE


Bangalore, Mangalore, Chandernagore, galore.
Sycamore, sagamore sophomore,
Mattamore.
Furthermore, evermore, nevermore, forevermore
Diaspore, zoospore, endospore.
Megaspore, microspore, tetraspore.
Exospore aplanospore.

Chickasaw dinosaur,
Megalosaur elasmosaur,
Plesiosaur, Tyrannosaur.
Titanosaur.

Louis d'Or humidor.
Cuspidor stevedore.

Lobsterthermidore.

Labrador matador, picador adore.
Ecuador toreador,
Conquistador.
San Salvador hereinbefore,
El Salvador before
Salvador afore.

 

tee hee

 

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