Thanks Allan!
I really enjoyed making that work and the way of gathering the lines of text - one line from each document of the search results for the spinal phrase give a bit more structure than my regular way of constructing poems which are more haphazard. If I add the other restriction of each line omitting any words that contain the following spinal letter, then that could add another way to dismiss various phrases and select others - but I am not sure that is needed for my purposes. We'll see.
Interesting.
So since that is not quite a Mesostic as Rod mentions then I suppose I should come up with some other name like maybe search phrase or spam totems or something. I also do not like words arranged purely by chance as a final result. I do like how material, gathered by chance that is created by a system, allows for serendipity and some personal choices derived from insights caused by the material gathered. That gives the collage/found material element that I am looking for.

I also like including a few words of my own [in the brackets] that, for me, gives a little extra touch of direction like adding shading to a form to force it to go behind or in front of something else or inclide it to flow in this or that direction. I like ambiguity but not total confusion or having things so criptic that others won't want to spend their time to figure it out. A certain amount of accessability, I think, is a good thing.

I like Cage a lot but his way of working and the resultant works do not always satisfy me. I believe a work of art should inspire one to cherish it.

Cecil

Allan Revich wrote:

Cecil,

 

That is very cool!

It will stay that way in my head whether it ‘works’ or not ;-)

 

Allan

 


From: owner-[email protected] [mailto:owner-[email protected]] On Behalf Of Cecil Touchon
Sent: Friday, May 19, 2006 4:24 PM
To: [email protected]
Subject: FLUXLIST: Mesostics: repressive guidance

 

hey rod, does this work? I took a found phrase from some spam mail  (repressive guidance) then I used it as a search term in google then I took one phrase from each resultant web page in the order that they were returned as results finding a phrase that I liked and that contained the spinal letter for that line. [bracketted] elements were added to bind things together when needed.
cecil


                                                                   Reparation shall be made [for]
                     those who experienced our govErnment’s abuses of dissenters
                        any form of government inausPicious to liberty,
                                      engage[d] in counteRrproductive, immoral pre-emptive war
                         will make their decisions basEd on the four fundamentals.
                                                  In contra-diStinction to tyranny
                       their bizarre, oppressive tacticS with their own citizens
                                           is cause for consIderable concern
             used to castigate us as a political moVement
                                   revealing secrets concErning the security of the state.
 
                                                           The liGht of operational experience
                              constrained what they coUld ask
                                                entirely in an Indigenous language.
                                Their ahistorical, fear-riDden, repressive approach [attracted]
                                  outsiders and reactionAries [who] urgently [a] call for unity
                                              calling attentioN to abuses at the highest levels
                                                              poliCy reform groups all over the world declare
           never accede to state or cultural policiEs.


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