On 2006 May 20, at 9:36 PM, Cecil Touchon wrote:

around the city a brutiSh cop
            past antiquEs
            up-and-comeR
            generally fIts
     having my camera cOnfiscated I arrived inside
      which lay the groUndwork for the next wave
                   not So far away, a giant
           once we crawLed out from under
             the countrY as a whole was outraged at the sham
 
            to take somE risks
                    useD in non-musical ways
           an electric Guitar
                    edgY is all about cutting, perhaps bleeding edge


Cecil,

I like how it looks. I wanted to use a bold spine too,
but I thought that this list frowned on HTML.
There are a some spots tho that don't fit the mesostic.

Between the "S" and "E" there should be neither (you have an "S" in "past")
"   "E" and "R" ...you have an "E" in "up-and-comer"
"   "R" and "I"  ...you have an "R" in "generally"
"   "I"  and "O" ...you have an "I" in "having"
"   "O" and "U" ...you have an "O" in "groundwork"
"   "Y" and "E" ...you have an "E" in "whole" and "outraged" and "the" and "take"
"   "E" and "D" ...you have an "E" in "used"
"   "G" and "Y" ...you have a "G" in "edgy
"   "Y" and the beginning "S" ...you have a "S" in "is" and "perhaps"

It's really a lot easier to master the 50% version first,
because with that version you're only looking for one repeated letter 
between the two. After that version becomes "natural" to you,
then you can step up to the 100% version where you're looking for 
both letters.


Rod

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