Anyone have thoughts on the following?
commit 77849693306b6dc0698ac45a4173d43f419e97e9
Author: Eitan Adler <[email protected]>
Date: Thu Mar 14 20:37:13 2013 -0400
Remove duplicate text from the introduction and move it into the
abstract. Simplify some of the text from both sections.
Reviewed by: doc
Approved by: ??? (mentor)
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
index 8c93f05..df5fa00 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
@@ -73,39 +73,26 @@
<releaseinfo>$FreeBSD$</releaseinfo>
<abstract>
- <para>This is the FAQ for &os; versions
- &rel2.relx; and &rel.relx;.
- If you are interested in helping with
- this project, send email to the &a.doc;. The latest version of
+ <para>This is the FAQ for &os; versions &rel2.relx; and
+ &rel.relx;. Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as
+ informative as possible; if you have any suggestions as to how
+ it may be improved, please feel free to mail them to the
+ &a.doc;.</para>
+
+ <para>The latest version of
this document is always available from the <ulink
url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/index.html";>&os;
website</ulink>.
It may also be downloaded as one large <ulink
url="book.html">HTML</ulink> file with HTTP or as a variety
of other formats from the <ulink
url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/";>&os; FTP
- server</ulink>. You may also want to <ulink
- url="&url.base;/search/index.html">Search the FAQ</ulink>.</para>
+ server</ulink>.</para>
</abstract>
</bookinfo>
<chapter id="introduction">
<title>Introduction</title>
- <para>Welcome to the &os;
- &rel2.relx; - and &rel.relx; -
- FAQ!</para>
-
- <para>As is usual with Usenet FAQs, this document aims to cover the
- most frequently asked questions concerning the &os; operating
- system (and of course answer them!). Although originally intended
- to reduce bandwidth and avoid the same old questions being asked
- over and over again, FAQs have become recognized as valuable
- information resources.</para>
-
- <para>Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as informative as
- possible; if you have any suggestions as to how it may be
- improved, please feel free to mail them to the &a.doc;.</para>
-
<qandaset>
<qandaentry>
<question id="what-is-FreeBSD">
--
Eitan Adler
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