>Number: 185632 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Handbook typo >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Jan 10 08:40:00 UTC 2014 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Jack Force >Release: >Organization: >Environment: >Description: There is a typo in the Handbook. Section 27.6.1. "Basic Configuration", first paragraph:
"If order to have..." => "In order to have..." The following paragraph also starts with "In order to..." which is overly verbose. >How-To-Repeat: Navigate to the following URL: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/mail-advanced.html >Fix: The diff file attached makes the sentence more clear and concise. Patch attached with submission follows: Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml =================================================================== --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml (revision 43462) +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml (working copy) @@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@ <para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or - the network has access to a configured - <acronym>DNS</acronym> server. If order to have mail - delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host, - do one of the following:</para> + the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym> + server. To have mail delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym> + on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: _______________________________________________ [email protected] mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]"
