https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=203350

            Bug ID: 203350
           Summary: Typo in handbook jails page
           Product: Documentation
           Version: Latest
          Hardware: Any
                OS: Any
            Status: New
          Severity: Affects Many People
          Priority: ---
         Component: Documentation
          Assignee: [email protected]
          Reporter: [email protected]

Created attachment 161401
  --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=161401&action=edit
SVN .diff file of the edits made to chapter.xml

There is a sentence with a typo/bad grammar in the Jails section of the
handbook.

At this link
https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails.html#jails-synopsis
there is a sentence that reads:

This chapter provides an overview of jail terminology are how to use FreeBSD
jails.


This can be better written as:

This chapter provides an overview of jail terminology for use with 
FreeBSD jails.

Attached is an SVN .diff file with the proposed fix.

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