https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=223679
Bug ID: 223679
Summary: Minor Style Guide Violation in Section 8.8 of FAQ
Product: Documentation
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any
OS: Any
Status: New
Severity: Affects Only Me
Priority: ---
Component: Documentation
Assignee: [email protected]
Reporter: [email protected]
Created attachment 188012
--> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=188012&action=edit
This is a diff file fixing this bug.
Section 8.8 of the FAQ features the word "you" to direct the user. This is
incorrect form.
https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/disks.html#idp59472104
The original line read "You can then boot LILO from BootEasy." However, a
better way to express the line would be "Then boot LILO from BootEasy."
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