Author: sveinung
Date: Wed Apr 12 11:59:52 2017
New Revision: 35231

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/freeciv?rev=35231&view=rev
Log:
Improve some achievement related texts.

Hrm Feature #650794's improvements of civ2civ3 achievement texts applied to
both sandbox and civ2civ3. Texts copied from Experimental.

Reported by wotan <wotan@gna>
Patch by David Fernandez <bardo@gna>

See gna bug #25589

Modified:
    branches/S2_6/data/civ2civ3/game.ruleset
    branches/S2_6/data/sandbox/game.ruleset

Modified: branches/S2_6/data/civ2civ3/game.ruleset
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/freeciv/branches/S2_6/data/civ2civ3/game.ruleset?rev=35231&r1=35230&r2=35231&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- branches/S2_6/data/civ2civ3/game.ruleset    (original)
+++ branches/S2_6/data/civ2civ3/game.ruleset    Wed Apr 12 11:59:52 2017
@@ -610,8 +610,8 @@
 type           = "Spaceship"
 unique         = FALSE
 culture        = 10000
-first_msg      = _("You're the first one to launch spaceship towards Alpha 
Centauri!");
-cons_msg       = _("You have launched spaceship towards Alpha Centauri!")
+first_msg      = _("You're the first one to launch a spaceship towards Alpha 
Centauri!");
+cons_msg       = _("You have launched a spaceship towards Alpha Centauri!")
 
 [achievement_map_known]
 name           = _("Entire Map Known")
@@ -619,8 +619,8 @@
 unique         = FALSE
 value          = 100
 culture        = 1000
-first_msg      = _("You're the first one to have entire world mapped!")
-cons_msg       = _("You have entire world mapped!")
+first_msg      = _("You're the first one to have mapped the entire world!")
+cons_msg       = _("You have mapped the entire world!")
 
 [achievement_another_island]
 name           = _("Land Ahoy")
@@ -628,8 +628,8 @@
 unique         = FALSE
 value          = 2
 culture        = 100
-first_msg      = _("As the first people in history, your people see foreign 
continent!")
-cons_msg       = _("You see foreign island!")
+first_msg      = _("As the first people in history, your people sight a 
foreign shore!")
+cons_msg       = _("You sight your first foreign shore!")
 
 [achievement_literate]
 name           = _("Literate")

Modified: branches/S2_6/data/sandbox/game.ruleset
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/freeciv/branches/S2_6/data/sandbox/game.ruleset?rev=35231&r1=35230&r2=35231&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- branches/S2_6/data/sandbox/game.ruleset     (original)
+++ branches/S2_6/data/sandbox/game.ruleset     Wed Apr 12 11:59:52 2017
@@ -632,8 +632,8 @@
 type           = "Spaceship"
 unique         = FALSE
 culture        = 10000
-first_msg      = _("You're the first one to launch spaceship towards Alpha 
Centauri!");
-cons_msg       = _("You have launched spaceship towards Alpha Centauri!")
+first_msg      = _("You're the first one to launch a spaceship towards Alpha 
Centauri!");
+cons_msg       = _("You have launched a spaceship towards Alpha Centauri!")
 
 [achievement_map_known]
 name           = _("Entire Map Known")
@@ -641,8 +641,8 @@
 unique         = FALSE
 value          = 100
 culture        = 1000
-first_msg      = _("You're the first one to have entire world mapped!")
-cons_msg       = _("You have entire world mapped!")
+first_msg      = _("You're the first one to have mapped the entire world!")
+cons_msg       = _("You have mapped the entire world!")
 
 [achievement_another_island]
 name           = _("Land Ahoy")
@@ -650,8 +650,8 @@
 unique         = FALSE
 value          = 2
 culture        = 100
-first_msg      = _("As the first people in history, your people see foreign 
continent!")
-cons_msg       = _("You see foreign island!")
+first_msg      = _("As the first people in history, your people sight a 
foreign shore!")
+cons_msg       = _("You sight your first foreign shore!")
 
 [achievement_literate]
 name           = _("Literate")


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