Hi everyone

The book project has been very slow going. Sorry about that. I
mentioned that I took on too much in the second half of 2022, so I
wasn't able to do editing on the book.

But that's clearing up, so I am back on the book project. My goal is
to have the book/ebook available in about two weeks.

I've posted draft 3 here:
https://gitlab.com/freedosproject/freedos28

PDF and ODT are in the "draft3" directory.

Major changes in this version include:

- Technical editing for grammar, spelling, clarity, etc throughout.
That means I made some changes to the replies, but these should be
small, not alter meaning, and not controversial. (For example,
expanding "RAM" to "memory," or removing wordy phrases like "of
course," and using consistent dates like "1990s" instead of "90ies" or
"`90s." Sometimes, some authors would include a 2-sentence tangent
that was unrelated to the topic, and I deleted those. Things like
that.)

- I have prepared the draft for print, for anyone who wants to order a
print copy of this (will be available at cost on Lulu). The book uses
6x9 US Trade paperback page size. Paragraphs are block paragraphs
where they immediately follow a heading, first-line indented
paragraphs after that.


This is a mostly final draft. All that remains should be me writing a
brief introduction for each chapter. (There is placeholder text there
now.) This will be about a paragraph to set the context for the
interview responses; I am not inserting my own "interview response" in
the book.

I do not plan to make further edits to the interview responses. So
this would be a great time to review the draft and let me know if I
made any errors in my edits.


Thanks!

Jim


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