Thanks, Jim:
Draft 2 is mostly formatting fixes (gluing lines together, some minor
formatting) but no content changes yet.
I took a brief squiz. But I didn't see images. Therefore please
illustrate it.
I recommend parsing the text through this readability checker.
https://www.online-utility.org/english/readability_test_and_improve.jsp
The Flesch Reading Ease score should be at least 60. Interpret that
score with the chart here.
https://writingstudio.com/blog/flesch-reading-ease/
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