Rob Crittenden wrote:
I added some more documentation and examples to the aci plugin on targets.
Running behind with reviews, sorry. Just a few minor fixes:
s/"This is primarily meant to be able to allow users to add/remove
members of a specific group only."/"This is primarily designed to enable
users to add or remove members of a specific group."
(I _think_ I understood that ok, and didn't change the meaning. Further,
if this target is only designed for this purpose, you don't need
"primarily". If it does something else, what is it?)
I couldn't grok 100% the "subtree" target description.
s/"... the ACI is allowed to do, they are one or more of:"/"... the ACI
is allowed to do, and are one or more of:"
For consistency's sake, s/lets/allows/ etc. Also see below:
allows members of the "addusers" taskgroup
lets members of the editors... group?
lets members of the admin group
You might need to review the examples a bit.
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