Hi, hope all are having a good holiday.   

 

I'd appreciate any comment on my condensed encyclopedia entry on the history
and issues of complex systems science for the Encyclopedia of the Earth.
The initial review comment was that "I think it is a nice piece, and
appropriate in terms of language, balance, and reading level for the EoE".
Are there basics I'm missing, or better turns of phrase I might use?    

 

If you're not familiar with EoE, it's a venture of the National Council for
Science and the Environment with Boston University, and fairly good at
presenting the hard science of global issues for a general educated
audience.   

Review draft: http://www.synapse9.com/drafts/EoE.ComplexSys-pfh.pdf 

EoE Journal http://www.earthportal.org/  and encyclopedia
http://www.eoearth.org/ 

 

 All the best,

 

Phil,

 

[email protected]   http://www.synapse9.com

"it's not finding what people say interesting, but finding the interest in
what they say"

 

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