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commit 1295456089786413ab3b93fefd09f8cd42ca30fa
Author: CSÉCSY László <[email protected]>
Date:   Wed Aug 6 19:27:40 2014 +0200

Some language fixes in mobile.txt

diff --git a/docs/mobile.txt b/docs/mobile.txt
index e89b917..90cd3a8 100644
--- a/docs/mobile.txt
+++ b/docs/mobile.txt
@@ -42,9 +42,10 @@ The only remaining task is to start a client: if you're on 
console, try the

== Conserving power

-The major consumers of power in a notebook are the LCD (size and brightness
-level), the CPU, hard drives, wireless transceivers like WiFi, Bluetooth,
-Infrared and the GPU if you have a powerful one.
+The major consumers of power in a notebook are the LCD (differences in size
+and brightness level can mean a lot), the CPU, hard drives, wireless
+transceivers like WiFi, Bluetooth, Infrared and the GPU if you have a
+powerful one.

You can conserve a fair amount of power if you lessen the brightness level
of the LCD screen. Some notebooks can remember two settings of this level,
@@ -57,9 +58,9 @@ needed. Klaptop has a setting for it, where you can specify 
the level.
//FIXME governors, Intel Centrino/Core, AMD

Letting the HDD spin down gives little extra battery operating time, but
-frequent spinups (data access) and spindowns wears the disk. Only useful
-in situations where there is no frequent need for data on hdd like holding
-a presentation.
+frequent spinups (data access) and spindowns wears the disk. This is only
+useful in situations where there is no frequent need for data on HDD like
+holding a presentation.

== Hibernation
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