-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA256 Hallo Thomas,
klingt so ganz gut, nur den vorletzten Satz würde ich etwas anpassen: s/voller \(Terminkalender\)/trotz seines vollen \1s/ Der fällt vom Schreibstil etwas aus der Reihe. Für tiefere Gedankengänge über die Verständlichkeit für die Allgemeinheit oder sowas bin ich aber schon zu müde. Gruß, Florian Am 19. August 2015 19:23:07 MESZ, schrieb Thomas Koch <[email protected]>: >I want to write a personal article for the German news website >nachdenkseiten.org - They asked for expert recommendations regarding >the >Windows 10 privacy disaster. > >Would somebody want to help me and review it? >https://gist.github.com/thkoch2001/d1bb1946804004d3f1d9 > >If you like, you can also make it an official article of the debian >project and >I withdraw mine. But I think it would be good to send it this week. > >Thank you, > >Thomas Koch > >CC to FSFE, if somebody has an time for a review. >_______________________________________________ >fsfe-de mailing list >[email protected] >https://mail.fsfeurope.org/mailman/listinfo/fsfe-de -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: APG v1.1.1 iQFTBAEBCAA9BQJV1NvcNhxGbG9yaWFuIEVybWlzY2ggPGZsb3JpYW4uZXJtaXNj aEBhbHVtbmkudHUtYmVybGluLmRlPgAKCRAu8tzCHoBI/RzyB/9xAhyQ3QZ7qMMs 5tibPVQJQjmeUuUFJKChk3oo22TK1l8cCYByyVj42Auk3mByuFdax7E5O+t73FsE EoGSNpnLp03ZvyOYRCFcBP/7WEgV1liGt/WzO6Z3rkVqxMVewx+IXRkc2ZdfwFs1 93plBZO3rM9orEZqU3i5PefDHRt8BI/xPwBaLK0llrXLDRv/ML40QRGPNkwDMnU9 myMJ8nIPmMyOy/Np/guXn3uaNMSVHJ5oyPheqd6wNYwphFaFTl32mCIMeU4MIxXH upRvmYnErw+B5eJKXk4Quk/C7TSeELE+6ib0gYIBKPUj8np6vJFqesvbl04ouRxB vtKfKKNq =eteB -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- _______________________________________________ fsfe-de mailing list [email protected] https://mail.fsfeurope.org/mailman/listinfo/fsfe-de
