Hi Phil! Thank you very much for your help. I've changed text on my site. Yours sincerely Igor Phil Vlasak <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: Hi Igor, Here is an adjustment to your web page text that sounds a little better to me: Lords of the galaxy 1.0 is available for download. It is an economic strategy game like monopoly, with shooter and action features. You have a space ship and move from planet to planet where you can buy and sell planets, and buy resources so you can move and your planets can earn money. You move through meteorites and other obstacles and struggle against galaxy monsters. In the offline game, the computer will imitate five other gamers. In the online game you can play with a minimum of one, and a maximum of five partners. To become lord of the galaxy you need to collect more money then other gamers.
Here is the text on your web site: Lords of the galaxy 1.0 is available for download now. This program is an economic strategy (like monopoly) with shooter and action features. You are businessman or businesswoman in the galaxy. You have a space ship. You move from one planet to another. You can buy and sell planets, you can buy resources for your planets to get earnings. You have to buy resources for your ship to be able to move to other planets. You will move through meteorites and other obstacles zones. You will struggle against galaxy monsters and other enemies to defend yourself. You should have more money then other gamers to become lord of the galaxy. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Igor Khmelevtsov" To: "Gamers Discussion list" Sent: Saturday, May 20, 2006 3:58 AM Subject: Re: [Audyssey] new game from vipgameszone > Hi! > Thank you very much for your suggestion. I'll keep it in my mind. > Best wishes > Igor > > Che wrote: > Hi Igor, > Just like Galaxy Ranger, you guys have come up with a really cool game, > executed very well and will definately be a lot of fun to play. > But unfortunately, just like Galaxy Ranger, the documentation is > disjointed, and hard to follow. > I realize english is probably hnot your first language, and given that > fact, I think you guys did the best you could. But personally, I think it > would be money very well spent if you hired someone to do your > documentation > that can spend time laying it out in a more organized manner, and make > sure > things are grammatically correct and consistent. > I tried to talk several people into playing Galaxy Ranger, because I felt > it was an excellent and unique game, but they got frustrated with the > documentation and gave up. I'm afraid if you guys don't change the docs > with this new release, you are going to lose a lot of potential players > out > there. > I highly recommend both this new game and Galaxy Ranger to all accessible > players out there. I promise you the time spent going through the > documentation will be well worth it. There are very few multiplayer games > out there for us, and Igor and his crew have created another great game. > I hope you take this in the spirit it was intended, which is constructive > critisism, not a flame. I just hate to see this game not get the audience > it deserves because people are confused by the instructions. > Later, > Che > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Igor Khmelevtsov" > To: > Sent: Friday, May 19, 2006 9:25 AM > Subject: [Audyssey] new game from vipgameszone > > >> Hi gamers! >> We have completed testing of our new game Lords of the galaxy. This game >> is an economic strategy (like monopoly) with shooter and action features. >> You can play this game not only with computer, but with your friends over >> the Internet too. It is a multiplayer game. You can play this game with >> 5 opponents. .Now you can download Lords of the galaxy from our site >> http://vipgameszone.com >> Download and join us! >> Sincerely yours >> Igor and Alina >> >> __________________________________________________ >> Do You Yahoo!? >> Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around >> http://mail.yahoo.com >> _______________________________________________ >> Gamers mailing list .. Gamers@audyssey.org >> To unsubscribe send E-mail to [EMAIL PROTECTED] You can >> visit >> http://audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org to make >> any subscription changes via the web. >> > > > _______________________________________________ > Gamers mailing list .. Gamers@audyssey.org > To unsubscribe send E-mail to [EMAIL PROTECTED] You can > visit > http://audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org to make > any subscription changes via the web. > > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around > http://mail.yahoo.com > _______________________________________________ > Gamers mailing list .. Gamers@audyssey.org > To unsubscribe send E-mail to [EMAIL PROTECTED] You can > visit > http://audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org to make > any subscription changes via the web. _______________________________________________ Gamers mailing list .. Gamers@audyssey.org To unsubscribe send E-mail to [EMAIL PROTECTED] You can visit http://audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org to make any subscription changes via the web. --------------------------------- Yahoo! Messenger with Voice. Make PC-to-Phone Calls to the US (and 30+ countries) for 2ยข/min or less. _______________________________________________ Gamers mailing list .. Gamers@audyssey.org To unsubscribe send E-mail to [EMAIL PROTECTED] You can visit http://audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org to make any subscription changes via the web.
