Hi Jim, Lol! Yeah, I know what you mean. My point was less to do with romance and more to do with setting the seen for the player so to speak.
When I get into a game of an adult nature I like to picture everything I can in my mind. Therefore the more information I can have about the girl, the room, the environment, etc helps make it feel more realistic. At ;least in my ongoing fantasy anyway. Plus one thing about being a good writer of interactive fiction is to try and very messages here and there. To use my Wonder Woman example instead of just saying she has long black hair I can embellish things by saying she has long dark curly tresses which says the same thing but in a more creative way. The ability to use different words, construct descriptions that get across the basic image in a round about way, etc isn't easy by any means. I think because I constantly read a lot I've picked up the art of how other authors describe things. They usually get their points across in round about ways through choosing their words carefully and using words that are less common such as tresses rather than hair or dark instead of black. As far as foreplay etc goes it was just a suggestion. I know there are mainstream adult games where you have to accomplish various steps just to get the girl undressed. The Office, for example, is such a game. In the Office you are a boss working late, and you decide to have a little after hours fun with your secretary. However, you can't just walk up to her and get into some hot sex. You end up having to set the mood such as llight some candles, poor her some wine, rub her neck, and then she will let you remove her blouse and finger her tits. More rubbing and kissing and then hher skirt goes bye-bye. You can do other things to get her to remove her bra and panties and so on. Obviously, this isn't the type of adult game you are aiming for here, but I do want to point out that it can be extremely fun building up to the sex. It makes the player be patient, try and figure out what the girl wants from them, and then to try and seduce them into having sex with them. Cheers! On 9/12/12, Jim Kitchen <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Thomas, > > Well I would say that your descriptions are a fine bit of creative writing > with all of the great descriptions etc. Like I said, I am not at all good > at that kind of writing. > > As far as the foreplay goes, you have to remember that this is Dungeon > Master with a Sado Masochistic theme not a romance novel. All of the times > that I have been with a professional Dominatrix and other people into Sado > Masochism there was no romance, it was all about the acts of Sado Masochism. > Really not much build up either. Get naked and be tied up or do as you are > told and enjoy the whip, nipple clamps, hot wax, electricity, physical and > mental domination etc etc. > > BFN > ----- Original Message ----- > Hi Jim, > > No problem. That I can do. It may take me a few days to write up some > examples of better game pros but it really doesn't require much > creative writing. It just needs more detail in terms of sight, > sounds, smells, and so on. Of course, the more creative a person is in > describing something the more appealing it will be. > > For example, since I'll need a clean description for this on list I'll > attempt to describe the DC super hero Wonder Woman with a bit of pros > to make it hopefully interesting for a gamer playing that type of > game. > > Princess Diana is an ageless beauty with a tall lean body, and > incredibly stunning looks. Long black tresses frames a pretty face > with high set cheekbones, sparkling blue eyes, and sensuous red lips. > She is dressed in a red spandex top, blue and white spandex star > spangled shorts, and a pair of red and white knee high boots. A Blue > and white star spangled cape is draped casually around her body, and a > golden magic lasso is tied around her waist and is affixed to her > yellow utility belt. Atop her head is a golden diadem with a read ruby > set in the middle befitting her station as an Amazon princess. Her > wrists are bound in two silver magic bracelets that give her > extraordinary powers and abilities beyond that of mortal men and > women. > > Basically, the more details one can give the better. Of course, a > person doesn't want to over do it either. However, the idea being we > want to set the mood, give enough detail that the world seems real to > the player, and since this game involves sex we want to attempt to > install some sort of longing for the potential lovers. That may > require some extra steps to see the woman naked. She might be dressed > in a night gown or some other skimpy clothing that can be more erotic > than walking in on a chick totally nude, and the first objective would > be to get her undressed. > > For example, if an adult game involved Wonder Woman I'd want to start > off with her in her costume. All of her personal attributes would b > hidden from view and I'd have to warm her up by kissingher, touching > her intimately, spanking her, whatever and one by one she'll give up > her clothing until she is naked. Then I could proceed to do more > intimate things with her. Perhaps tie her to the bed with her golden > lasso and do what I wanted with her. :D > > The point being is that the act of undressing the female NPC is erotic > in of itself, and helps build excitement. The way Dungeon Master is > right now all I have to do is find a certain item and use it on the > right girl before having sex with her. There is little in the way of > foreplay or build up which I think would make the game more exciting. > > HTH > > Jim > > Whip me, beat me, make me write bad software. > > [email protected] > http://www.kitchensinc.net > (440) 286-6920 > Chardon Ohio USA > --- > Gamers mailing list __ [email protected] > If you want to leave the list, send E-mail to > [email protected]. > You can make changes or update your subscription via the web, at > http://mail.audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org. > All messages are archived and can be searched and read at > http://www.mail-archive.com/[email protected]. > If you have any questions or concerns regarding the management of the list, > please send E-mail to [email protected]. > --- Gamers mailing list __ [email protected] If you want to leave the list, send E-mail to [email protected]. You can make changes or update your subscription via the web, at http://mail.audyssey.org/mailman/listinfo/gamers_audyssey.org. 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