Thanks Mark. I've applied most your suggestions below (and the patches in your previous emails), with the commented exception:
On Mon, Jan 10 2011, Mark Harig wrote: [...] > Also, I suggest replacing "a per REPL basis" with "a per-REPL basis." I have never seen "per" used with an hyphen. I just checked MW's Dictionary of English Usage, Swan's Practical English Usage and the OED, and in none of the more two dozen examples they give is there an hyphen: why do you think hyphenation is (more) correct here? Cheers, jao -- A man should never be ashamed to own he has been in the wrong, which is but saying, in other words, that he is wiser today than he was yesterday. -Alexander Pope, poet (1688-1744)
