Thank you, Elwyn. In the event that we do not get a new version before
the telechat, I think these remaining comments may be handled via an RFC
Editor's note, do you agree?
Thanks,
- Mark
Elwyn Davies wrote:
I was selected as General Area Review Team reviewer for this
specification
(for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-ldp-08.txt
Intended Status: Proposed Standard
Shepherding AD: Mark Townsley
Review Trigger: IESG Telechat 19 Jan 2006
Summary:
This document is almost ready for PS. The update from -07 to -08 has
addressed my concerns except for a couple of editorial nits.
The document needs a normative reference to RFC2119 to be pointed at
by the conventions section.
Editorial nits (input to copy editing):
The Boiler Plate is non-standard.
Location of the conventions section and section numbering of ToC needs
fixing.
s4.1: Acronyms GRE, L2TP and IPSEC unexpanded.
s6.1.1: Acronyms AGI, TAII, SAII are unexpanded.
s9, para 2: s/a identifier/an identifier/
s15: should refer to RFC3036 (LDP) registry in which MAC List TLV type
is to be registered.
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