Here is my review: This seems ready for publication, however there are some nits to fixed and I have one open question:
Nits found, ID nits checker output at the end of this mail Where will the nodeid subobject defined? Should it be registered in IANA or elsewhere? John dnits 1.85 tmp/draft-ietf-mpls-nodeid-subobject-07.txt: Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate... * The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? RFC 3978 Section 5.4 paragraph 1 text: "Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2006)." ... text found in draft: "Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2005). This document is subject ............................................^ to the rights, licenses and restrictions contained in BCP 78, and except as set forth therein, the authors retain all their rights.") * The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Reference to BCP 78. RFC 3978 Section 5.4 paragraph 2 text: "This document is subject to the rights, licenses and restrictions contained in BCP 78, and except as set forth therein, the authors retain all their rights." Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: - The page length should not exceed 58 lines per page, but there was 1 longer page, the longest (page 1) being 482 lines Miscellaneous warnings: None. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
