I was selected as General Area Review Team reviewer for this specification
(for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Summary: This document is on the right track for publication as a BCP.
Although the document is pretty densely written, it's not too hard to
follow, especially given that this draft is a clarification of an existing
specification, so not something a implementer would pick up without any
previous background on the topic area.
Review comment: There was one point that I wish was explained better - there
are five different places in the draft where a statement like "use of
Node-ID based Hello session is optimal for detecting signaling adjacency
failure" is made , but "optimal" is never explained or put in context. I can
guess what I think it means, but I'm guessing, and a sentence or two of
explanation might make the document clearer for many readers.
Thanks,
Spencer
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