> This revision of the document addresses most of my review > comments. I still have a concern about the comment I made on section > 3.1, but it should not be a blocking concern (and others may not > share it). Ready for publication as Informational.
Just FYI, the IESG approved this document this morning (well, yesterday
morning now, I guess). The following are a couple of tweaks that are
being requested of the RFC editor ... including the one you re-flagged
above.
Thanks for the detailed comments!
allman
OLD: (from section 3.1)
Since TCP traditionally (in the absence of ECN) uses losses to
infer congestion, there is a rather intimate coupling between
congestion control and loss recovery mechanisms.
NEW:
TCP traditionally treats lost packets as indicating
congestion-related loss, and cannot distinguish between
congestion-related loss and loss due to transmission errors. Even
when ECN is in use, there is a rather intimate coupling between
congestion control and loss recovery mechanisms.
===
OLD: (from section 3.3)
A draft that is currently in the RFC Editor's queue for
publication [tcpmd5app] deprecates TCP MD5 for use outside BGP.
NEW:
RFC 4278 deprecates the use of TCP MD5 outside BGP [RFC4278].
Please change [tcpmd5app] to reference RFC 4278.
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OLD:
RFC 2452 S: "IP Version 6 Management Information Base for the
Transmission Control Protocol" (December 1998)
This document [RFC2452] augments RFC 2012 by adding an IPv6-
specific connection table. The rest of 2012 holds for any IP
version.
NEW:
RFC 2452 S: "IP Version 6 Management Information Base for the
Transmission Control Protocol" (December 1998)
This document [RFC2452] augments RFC 2012 by adding an IPv6-
specific connection table. The rest of 2012 holds for any IP
version. RFC 2012 is now obsoleted by RFC 4022.
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