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-------- Original Message -------- Subject: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ipsec-ike-ecp-groups Date: Wed, 10 May 2006 11:49:17 -0400 From: Ron Bonica <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED], [EMAIL PROTECTED], [EMAIL PROTECTED] Folks, The following are a few comments: - Please run the draft through the ID-nit checker at http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/. Clean up all of the things that it complains about. - Please define every acronym that you use (e.g., ECP, ECC, MODP) The following is just a suggestion: You might want to add one or two pages of introductory material so that the uninitiated reader can follow the draft. Maybe a paragraph that describes each of the following: - ike - diffie-helman key exchange - Oakley groups - modp groups - elliptic curve groups As an outsider, I had a hard time following the draft. I had to give myself a refresher on the last three items before I could follow the draft. Ron _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
