Attached is my review of the specified document, submitted as part of the Gen-ART process. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
Document: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ippm-reordering-13.txt Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: While my second comment from my last review has successfully been resolved, I don't feel my first comment has been. "1. In section 2, first paragraph, the term 'backwards step' is used but not defined, either explicitly or with reference to another document. Similarly, the terms 'non-reversing reference value' is also used without definition or reference." While a reference has been added after the sentence on 'non-reversing reference value', I downloaded the referenced paper and it did not seem to define the term either. I tried googling both of these terms to see if they were perhaps very common terms , but I did not have much luck. Sharon Chisholm Nortel Ottawa, Ontario Canada _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
