These documents appear ready for publication.
The changes to the security document address my concerns (and make other useful improvements.)

id-nits still notes that the applicability document appears to use 2119 language without a 2119 reference, and has many "references" that are not "referenced". I did not see any indication of significant changes in language usage. (Either I am starting at shadows, or the RFC Editor will deal with it I guess.)

Yours,
Joel M. Halpern

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TSV DDP/RDMAP Security (Proposed Standard) - 3 of 4
<http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-rddp-security-09.txt>draft-ietf-rddp-security-09.txt
        Note: PROTO Sherpherd: David Black ([EMAIL PROTECTED])
Applicability of Remote Direct Memory Access Protocol (RDMA) and Direct Data Placement (DDP) (Informational) <http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-rddp-applicability-06.txt>draft-ietf-rddp-applicability-06.txt
        Note: PROTO Shepherd: David Black ([EMAIL PROTECTED])

Token: <mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]>Jon Peterson
Reviewer: Joel Halpern


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