It's rough in parts. This is one that would have benefitted from early copy-editing. Jari just added it to the IESG agenda.
Brian Francis Dupont wrote:
I'll send a full review tomorrow (there are at least 2x45 mn of free time scheduled for France :-) but my opinion is the document is too unpleasant to read... I'd like to get a second opinion from a native English writer. Regards [EMAIL PROTECTED] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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