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Document Tag: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-04.txt Document Title: RADIUS Authentication Client MIB for IPV6 Intended Status: Proposed Standard Shepherding AD: Dan Romascanu This is a followup on my review of an earlier version (-03) ---------------- Begin review ---------------- Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a [type] RFC ---------------------------------------------------------------- The following editorial issue is noted for the convenience of possible copy editors but is not part of the technical review. The authors can probably just mention it to the RFC Editor, who may well notice it anyway... Typos ----- The typo I noticed in the -03 draft is still there. Proper english usage calls for a comma after the word "extensions" in the third sentence of the abstract. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
