Hi, Sally,
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
Summary - this draft is almost ready for publication. I have some very minor
comments that I'm sending along. Please look at these comments along with
any other Last Call comments you may receive.
Thanks,
Spencer Dawkins
p.s. I have no editorial nits for this draft - thanks! It was clean and easy
to understand...
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- this draft is targeted as a BCP - just seems strange, because it's a lot
more like a requirements document. If everyone else is OK with this, I'm ok
(just confused about why considerations for additional work on ECN would be
a BCP).
- In Figure 1, I THINK the "Old Router" is actually an "Old Router
Experiencing Congestion" - is this correct? If so, labeling the router as
"experiencing congestion" would have helped me - at first glance, the figure
seems to say "old routers drop non-ECN traffic", but what I think is
actually meant is "old routers drop non-ECN traffic when they encounter
congestion because there is no other choice".
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