I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10.txt .
For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. This is a small, well-documented MIB module consisting entirely of textual conventions. It would be ok to publish in its current form. My one concern is that the security considerations section seems to be overly triumphant in declaring that "this document has no impact on the security of the Internet." I would weaken that to "no significant impact" and complement it with a sentence calling the reader's attention to the requirements and guidance in Section 3.4 of RFC 4181 on Security Considerations sections in MIB module specifications. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Senior Technologist EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 [EMAIL PROTECTED] Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
