Thanks for the catch, Spencer. This was fixed to now read:
Based on this schema, the document contains some number of <foo>
elements followed by some number of <bar> elements.
Thanks,
Jonathan R.
Spencer Dawkins wrote:
This draft was approved for publication (at 06), and then pulled from
the RFC Editor queue for revisions to meet requirements of other SDOs,
including OMA. It's being re-Last Called, because of the scope of
changes made after approval.
As the Gen-ART reviewer for 06
(http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/reviews/draft-ietf-simple-xcap-050217-dawkins.txt),
I re-reviewed version 11 for Last Call.
This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. There
is one burst of incoherency that should be fixed. In 8.2.3, this text
appears:
Not any <bar> element may precede one or multiple <foo> elements.
I have no idea how this actually parses - was the intention that "No
<bar> element...", or something else?
This comment should be processed with any other comments received at
Last Call.
I should also say that the updated sections seem much clearer than the
05-06 versions of the corresponding text. Good job.
Thanks,
Spencer
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