Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-epon-mib-05.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Review Date: 26 October 2006 IETF LC Date: 19 October 2006 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC. Comments: Acronyms should also be expanded in the title of the draft. Generally, abstracts should not have references so that they could be distributed independently of the main document. The author may want to consider removing all references from the abstract. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
