Miguel
Miguel Garcia wrote:
Just restricting to the point that requires further discussion:
Padma Pillay-Esnault wrote:
Miguel Garcia wrote:
- None of the figures in the draft include a caption. Captions are
nice to refer to figures (even from other drafts). I would suggest
to add captions to all the figures.
Can you be more explicit here.
Take for example the figure located in Section 4.1. I am suggestion to
add a caption, so I can see that this is "Figure 1" (and not Figure
3), and there is a title for such figure. Assuming that Figure 1
represents the OSPF Options field, then you could write:
+---+---+---+---+---+---+---+---+
|DN |O |DC |EA |NP |MC |E |MT |
+---+---+---+---+---+---+---+---+
Figure 1: The OSPF Options field
Also, you should capitalize "Options" in the text, as it is done in
RFC 2328.
OK.
Thanks!
Padma
BR,
Miguel
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