I'm sorry. This document left me completely at sea.
The writing style assumes a tremendous amount of domain knowledge.
If this is appropriate, then someone with that domain knowledge needs
to review this.
For example, some parts of the document seem to treat the MPEG-2
channel as uni-directional, while other parts talk about
bi-directional communication. And there is no overview that
describes the general operation of the address resolution, so I can
not even tell what to make of the many data structures and messages
that are referenced. (An overview of the operation is particularly
important if the stream is indeed uni-directional, since I don't know
what it means to have an address resolution scheme on a truly
uni-directional channel.)
Yours,
Joel M. Halpern
At 10:08 PM 11/2/2006, Mary Barnes wrote:
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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
- 'Address Resolution Mechanisms for IP Datagrams over MPEG-2 Networks '
<draft-ietf-ipdvb-ar-05.txt> as an Informational RFC
IETF LC ends on 2006-11-13.
The file can be obtained via
<http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipdvb-ar-05.txt>http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipdvb-ar-05.txt
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