Document: draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-03
Reviewer: Harald Tveit Alvestrand
Review Date: 2006-12-07
IETF LC End Date: 2006-12-11
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: Ready to go. Small grumbles.

Comments:

This document does 2 things:

- Register an extension to pass implementation identities around
- Change the registration requirement for extensions to allow Experimental 
extensions to be registered

The first point is adequately described, with more than enough caveats about 
what to do and not to do.

The last one seems quite reasonable, given that Informational registration was 
already allowed. I'm not completely happy about the lumping of that one into 
this document, but that's the call of the WG and AD.

Two points, which may be addressed if the document is revisited for other 
reasons:

1) I read RFC 3720 section 13.5.2 as saying that publication of extensions as 
standards-track is allowed, even though the wording is quite convoluted. So the 
implication of the language in section 5 that it was previously restricted to 
informational only seems unwarranted.

2) It would be good if section 5 of this draft pointed specifically at section 13.5.2 of RFC 3720 as the 
section to be updated, and provided specific language to be read as "this section is now replaced 
by". I *think* the text only means that the words "as an informational RFC" are changed to 
"as an informational or experimental RFC, as appropriate", but it would be nice to be 100% certain 
that this is the intended effect, and that no other section of RFC 3720 needs changing (my scan of 3720 might 
have overlooked something).

http://tools.ietf.org/wg/ips/draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key/ claims that 
there are no nits. Good.


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