I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Review Date: 2007-01-07
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2007-01-11
Summary: The document is ready for publication
Comments: I performed the Gen-ART review of version -02 of the document,
where a few issues were outlined. These issues have been properly
addressed and the document is ready for publication.
Note: the IDnits tool indicates a few warnings, which may be also
addressed by the RFC Editor at a later stage, but if there is a need for
a new revision of the draft, these nits should be taken into account.
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idnits 1.123
tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt:
tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt(651): Line is too long: the
offending characters are 'y RFC number)'
tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt(652): Line is too long: the
offending characters are 'y RFC number)'
tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt(676): Line is too long: the
offending characters are 'y RFC number)'
tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt(677): Line is too long: the
offending characters are 'y RFC number)'
Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate...
the boilerplate looks good.
No nits found.
Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
Nothing found here (but these checks do not cover all of
1id-guidelines.txt yet).
Miscellaneous warnings:
- The copyright year in the IETF Trust Copyright Line does not match the
current year
Experimental warnings:
- Unused Reference: 'RFC1194' is defined on line 544, but not referenced
'[RFC1194] Zimmerman, D., "Finger User Information Protocol", RFC
1...'
No nits found.
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BR,
Miguel Garcia
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Nokia Research Center Helsinki, Finland
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