Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-dna-link-information-05.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Review Date: 9 January 2006 IETF LC Date: 11 december 2006 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: Acronyms need to be expanded on their first use (e.g., BSSID). There is a normative "MAY" in the Introduction, before RFC 2119 is referenced. There should not be normative statements before Section 1.1., which references RFC 2119. References DNA4 and RFC 3971 appear in the text but not in the references. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
